Crit-- Biggest thing, I wish you threw up a graphic element in behind her. I know you said it was quick, but a darker red circle, or a rectangle framing her a bit... the full red BG flattens it a little to me. I think her boobs look like they're squeezed through that shirt... Good luck man!
Excellent stuff man - don't need to be a capcom geek to blow this one up!! Totally rocks, great job on the hair and face too. Congrats too for amping up voltage....he's got a good battle going on this week!