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Jug you should already know by now that I really dig alot of your work. But I gotta say that this one I'm not feeling all that much. Color wise it's really working and strong all around especially around the bar where Logan, Kurt , and I'm guessing that must be Piotr. I think what throws me off a bit is their positions while sitting, nothing too bad about it but it just feels slightly off to me. Kind of feel like as if you should silhouette somewhere around their legs and even some of the bar patrons as well. Possibly highlight the overhead lights over the three as well to make us focus in on it more. I totally get you're trying to make a faithful recreation but tweaking it slightly will do no wrong. The second wide panel is pretty good but the background feels really dull. Would like to see some kind of activity even if it is silhouetted in or otherwise implied. And Piotr's position when talking to Logan looks a bit awkward. Same goes for Kurt. Beyond those issues I think this works fairly well in a close as possible recreation.